When you're calculating the Δ(PV), you're calculating Δ(PV) per mole of sigma-toluic acid reacted (for example, if two moles of sigma-toluic acid were reacted, you would have ni = 18 instead of ni = 9), so you would want to use the ΔU in kJ/mol.
Another small point, since you're given Hf for liquid water, water should not count as a gas and nf = 8, not 12. However, if you had used Hf for gaseous water, then you would be correct in using nf = 12. This is why it is important to include the phase subscripts when specifying a reaction since:
C8H8O2 (s) + 9O2 (g) --> 4H2O (l) + 8CO2 (g)
and
C8H8O2 (s) + 9O2 (g) --> 4H2O (g) + 8CO2 (g)
will have different heats of reaction.