Hi lily,
Generally speaking, it is not a good idea to express a rate law in terms of reaction intermediates such as CH3I and HI in your example because the concentrations of these species are fleeting and usually unknown. Thus, to solve the problem, you must use the steady state approximation, as the question instructs you to do in order to find expressions that relate the concentrations of these intermediates to the concentrations of reactants and products. To simplify the problem however, you can imagine the given reactions to be a simple enzyme kinetics scheme, acetaldehyde being the substrate, iodine the enzyme, and methane the product. Best of luck!