The mechanism is correct but this does not automatically mean that the posted product would be the major one. The (selective) formation of a reaction product depends on a wide range of factors, e.g. thermodynamic, kinetic, nature of leaving group, formed ring strain, hard/soft-acidity/basicity of reactants, solvent effect, etc.
Indicatively, using of NaH instead of EtONa will minimize debromination side products and it will avoid the formation of any 4-(2-hydroxyethyl)-2-cyclohexenyl ethyl ether.