I was wondering which abstract is better, and suggestions to improve. Also I have searched for hours to find a literature value for the melting point of my amide derivative (2,6-Dimethoxybenzamide) as we are not allowed to cite the ones provided to us in class/lab in our report but I cant find one anywhere. Also the only article cited for the melting point of my amide on scifinder makes no mention of my compound or even melting points in general so idk what thats about.
Abstract 1:
The aromatic carboxylic acid in Sample #933 was isolated, characterized, and identified. 49.7 mmol of crude acid was recovered from the sample via acid-base extraction. The acid was isolated via recrystallization in toluene. The melting point of the isolated acid was determined to be 186–187ºC. The equivalent weight of the isolated acid was determined to be 200.2 ± 0.3 g/mol via indicator titration using phenolphthalein. The pK¬a of the acid was determined to be 4.1 via potentiometric titration. The acid’s amide derivative was determined to have a melting point of 155–156ºC. Based on the characteristics of the isolated acid, it was identified as 2,6-Dimenthoxybenzoic acid.
Abstract 2:
The aromatic carboxylic acid in Sample #933 was isolated, characterized and identified. 49.7 mmol of crude acid was recovered from the sample. The melting point of the isolated acid was determined to be 186–187ºC. The equivalent weight of the isolated acid was determined to be 200.2 ± 0.3 g/mol. The pKa of the acid was determined to be 4.1. The acid’s amide derivative was determined to have a melting point of 155–156ºC. The isolated acid was identified as 2,6-Dimenthoxybenzoic acid.
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