I think your answer for TLC being qualitative and quantitative is fine. You might want to add another sentence stating exactly how TLC is used for quant analysis....for example scraping the bands, derivitzing and then analysis by GC.
You have good reasons for TLC problems, but I would remove #4. My experience with the sides of the filter paper getting wet was the spots becoming "curved" (think of a smily face), which resulted in uneven spots.
Here are some other reasons for poor TLC results
1. Not optimizing the mobile phase. If the mobile phase is too polar or too non polar for your sample, the separation will be poor.
2. Choosing the wrong kind of plate. For some applications, silica gel plates are all you need. For others (like lipid separation) a plate with a gypsum binder is needed.
3. Not activating the plate prior to use.