DD,
This is constructive criticism, so take this in a positive manner. You should, no matter what, always always always note the temperature at which the reaction starts. Provides much useful data. LDA is a good one here, would stay away from DBU (just doesn't work as well bc too bulky).
Word to the wise. When working with hydrides, use a delivery agent such as Na+(OAc)3BH. (Sodium Tri-Acetoxyborohydride, also known as STAB). Very non toxic, just cannot be used in aqueous solution as I note. I learned this from an exceptionally smart chemist on this site. Check the δH Formation of H2 gas, and you will see quite rapidly why I caution you about super bases. They are absolutely unpredictable, unless very careful considerations are taken. Just my .02.
-Zack