I actually have used Evan's method before to determine magnetic susceptibility (actually, spin state) of iron centers in heme complexes. It's a little hard to follow your post because of the equation formatting and lack of units anywhere. I had to look up my own publication but this is the equation we used:
[tex]\chi_i=\frac{-3}{4m\pi}\frac{\nu_o-\nu_i}{\nu_s}+\chi_0[/tex]
Here, νi and νo are the respective chemical shift values, expressed in Hertz, of the standard in the absence (outer tube) and presence (inner tube) of the paramagnetic species; νs is the resonance frequency of the spectrometer (e.g. 500 MHz); m is the concentration of paramagnetic species in the inner tube expressed in grams per cubic centimeter; and χ0 is the magnetic susceptibility per gram of the standard. The magnetic susceptibility per mole of the paramagnetic species, χm, is determined by multiplying χi by the molar mass.
You may also look up Evans's original paper:
Evans, D. F.; James, T. A. J. Chem. Soc., Dalton Trans. 1979, 723-726.
If you can provide numbers and units for some of the input values, maybe we can find where you're going wrong.