for every 2 moles of Al there are 3 moles of H2 .. its molar ratio
So you are assuming that all hydrogen is from Al reaction? What about Fe?
Initially you assumed masses of Al and Fe to be x and y. Try to convert these masses to numbers of moles and express hydrogen moles through these values.
trying to find original concentration
What original concentration? There are two concentrations GIVEN in the question.
Hmmm... perhaps you meant that you are trying to convert units. Try this
percentage to molarity lecture.
can you point out where i should start correction instead of just saying its wrong.
That's not easy if I don't understand what you did - and how.
Convert % concentration to molarity, then use CV=const (read this
dilution and mixing lecture).
You may also try CASC - although you will only get the result, not the way it was calculated.