That answer is missing nothing, a good job, all around.
'Tho some of the terms are in your own words, and not the technical definitions of the concepts, example, we don't say that "peaks blur" there is a better chromatographic term for peaks that are too close together.
Also, "easily form in the gas phase" seems a little too colloquial, and not very technical, but you might be better off leaving it, because it's in your own words, and not copied from a book. Watch stuff like that. If the instructor calls you on it, it means they expect you to pick up chemistry jargon a little bit more.