i've followed that prep. it's ok. but they use a huge excess of P2O5. this causes a fair bit of heat to come off when washing with bicarbonate. so much so that...let's just say i lost some material to charring. here's a rough recap of the procedure I followed.
0.17 mmol of alcohol, 11.5 mmol of methylal (ie, dimethoxymethane), 500 mg of P2O5, in 1 mL of CHCl3 (which was dried over P2O5). After 30 min (done by TLC), pour into ice-cooled carbonate solution. Wash out flask with same, combine, and then extract with ether. wash with brine, dry. they got a 94 % yield.
here's another procedure if you haven't found one already.
http://www3.interscience.wiley.com/journal/60501999/abstractquick summary: 1 eq of alcohol, 1.1 eq of P2O5, 10 eq of methylal, 100 mL of dry CHCl3. stirred RT overnight. add another 100 mL CHCl3 and then some crushed ice to mixture, then neutralized with carbonate solution. extract, wash...etc. 84 % yield