You're getting close - the spheres don't actually go through the surface, they merely sit on top of it, so in your right hand picture the line needs to go underneath the spheres rather than through them.
However, your left hand picture is sufficient for your purposes. You now have four spheres in a square. What is the area of the square? That is the amount of surface area covered by four molecules of ammonia.
And yes, you've got the total surface area of carbon right
Now that you know the amount of surface area of the carbon, and the amount occupied by four molecules of ammonia, it shouldn't be difficult to find the total number of molecules of ammonia absorbed and back-calculate to the volume of ammonia gas.