Much better. The arrow from butanol to H2SO4 is in the right direction. But something is still missed. The leaving (nuclophyge) arrow on sulfuric acid is not represented.
Try to draw the arrows correctly at the first step. The attacking arrow starts from the electron pair of the butanol oxygen to the hydrogen of the one hydroxyl group of sulfuric acid and the leaving arrow starts from the H-O bond of that hydroxyl group and forms the bisulfate anion:
CH3CH2CH2CH2-O(¨)H + H-OSO3H → CH3CH2CH2CH2-OH2(+) + (-)OSO3H
The above symbols in parenthesis, reperesent the electron pair and the positive and negative charge, respectively.